THIS IS MY COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY, IS IT READY TO BE SENT TO COLLEGES?

first of all, you are very y. although you might be "all that", you DO NOT show off on the writing portion of the application. You might be really great at math, but it's pretty bad when you say, "Instead, poor teaching has done irreparable harm to what might otherwise have been one of the great mathematical minds of my generation."...einstein didnt't even think he was like that. that's very narcistic. you are sounding like "poor your" and "if only my peers weren't so stupid". that might be so, but you don't bag on them when you write this. secondly, If i was in the admission process and i saw this, i would, honestly, reject you, just because you are so y, put down your peers, and consider yourself the "best". obviously in the "muse off" they found something better in the 1st place winner. and if your "so smart" you would not, in any cirstance, receive a 190, 310, and 210 on the sat. thats ridiculous. My 9th grade sister could beat that score, and our teachers are pretty bad. you are just trying to give lame excuses for all the problems you went through. and why did u need tutors if you're so smart. and wouldnt you get a better score than those if you had one...and a 0.4732? seriously? thats like a D- average. how in the h*ll can you be the valedictorian? that's ridiculous. its great to be confident about admission, but you shouldnt say "i am counting the days until the day of my enrollment, and i know tat you are just as excited as me." how do you know that?..i'm not excited to meet you. actually, if i was an admission officer, you'd be at the bottom. and by the way, it should be "frankly incapable".